Ryuzaki
08-27-2006, 01:55 PM
This is my first poetry, I'd rather you read it, then see if you understand where I am with it, if it's good. I did all of this from my head, what came after the next. So please enjoy. :D Title: She's My sanctuary!
She's My Sanctuary!
My sanctuary.....my sanctuary...yeah....me and you....
why, you're watching, you're sitting there, why are you sleeping?
need to talk, what to do, i can't talk to anyone else, it must be you!
I sit there waiting, you don't want to talk, you really arn't there isn't true.
I know where you are, you're at home arn't you?
Why won't you talk, why can't we talk, make everything seem cool?
I want to get my feelings out, i must tell you how i feel, about you.
My outlook has changed, I see things as Clear as I've ever seen them before.
Everything has its reason, everything does stuff for a purpose, but I need to talk!
My heart tells me to talk, it says you want to, it says I NEED to, we NEED to talk.
I love you, but I don't know how you feel.
I say mean things sometimes, I don't mean them.
I just didn't know what else to do, to say. This feels too good to be true.
I thought I changed, I did but not enough yet. I needed time....but...
You didn't talk, I didn't talk, we didn't talk, we should've TALKED!
It seemed like we didn't need to, but we did, more then we both knew!
Everything would've been fine still, if only we talked...
Now that it's done, I know what I want to do...
I am more open, things are more clear. I feel what I want to feel.
I know what I want. My heart tells me so. I can't ignore this. It's too strong not to feel!
And you and I, could still be something.....but we both must want it or all for not.
I do not know if you still want to, I do not know how you feel.
I think you still, love me but, are you just too confused?
Is life being complicated for you again? What is the problem, you know you can talk to me.
Why don't you talk to me, when can we talk?! I want to talk with you!
It may seem strange, it may seem mushy, something we all avoid, maybe the truth.
We like the Mushy things, we like the awww lovey enviorment.
Those who denie it, might like it more then others!
My heart expresses how it feels, it's always done so, everyone's has!
The Difference is, Now I'm listening, I'm truly listening. I'm not making things difficult!
I know what I want, I know why I want it. I know what I want to do.
Death tis not time for you yet, it is not right, and never is right.
Time is on my side, and I will keep it that way.
I do not like waiting, if I have to I will.
I will do anything, it's how my heart feels!
Together, we were, just...just us. It was wonderful!
I know I've not felt anything like it before! I Loved that feeling more then any other!
It wouldn't matter if i won the lottery, $1000, a trip to Hawaii. No...
I had you, I had everything, but what I truly wanted....
Don't get me wrong no, I did want you, I loved you....
I just know why I wanted other things, and more importantly more reasons why I wanted you. Why I liked you, loved you, want to be with you.
I"ve changed, and made it so I know, why I feel the way I do.
My heart tells me, and I listen, we work together, having fun, feeling emotion.
We know what we must do, we are one, and two. We both love you.
We would go on forever with you, always talking, laughing, with you.
As long as it's with you, it doesn't matter, it shouldn't matter if anything else.
If we're poor, in the middle, rich...it doens't matter where we live.
WE are together, we can survive, I just want you. I don't care how others feel about this.
I know if they listened to their hearts they would know too, what they want and how they could try to get it for themselves, I want to get you.
As long as we're together, nothing We cannot Do!
Discuss Please :D
She's My Sanctuary!
My sanctuary.....my sanctuary...yeah....me and you....
why, you're watching, you're sitting there, why are you sleeping?
need to talk, what to do, i can't talk to anyone else, it must be you!
I sit there waiting, you don't want to talk, you really arn't there isn't true.
I know where you are, you're at home arn't you?
Why won't you talk, why can't we talk, make everything seem cool?
I want to get my feelings out, i must tell you how i feel, about you.
My outlook has changed, I see things as Clear as I've ever seen them before.
Everything has its reason, everything does stuff for a purpose, but I need to talk!
My heart tells me to talk, it says you want to, it says I NEED to, we NEED to talk.
I love you, but I don't know how you feel.
I say mean things sometimes, I don't mean them.
I just didn't know what else to do, to say. This feels too good to be true.
I thought I changed, I did but not enough yet. I needed time....but...
You didn't talk, I didn't talk, we didn't talk, we should've TALKED!
It seemed like we didn't need to, but we did, more then we both knew!
Everything would've been fine still, if only we talked...
Now that it's done, I know what I want to do...
I am more open, things are more clear. I feel what I want to feel.
I know what I want. My heart tells me so. I can't ignore this. It's too strong not to feel!
And you and I, could still be something.....but we both must want it or all for not.
I do not know if you still want to, I do not know how you feel.
I think you still, love me but, are you just too confused?
Is life being complicated for you again? What is the problem, you know you can talk to me.
Why don't you talk to me, when can we talk?! I want to talk with you!
It may seem strange, it may seem mushy, something we all avoid, maybe the truth.
We like the Mushy things, we like the awww lovey enviorment.
Those who denie it, might like it more then others!
My heart expresses how it feels, it's always done so, everyone's has!
The Difference is, Now I'm listening, I'm truly listening. I'm not making things difficult!
I know what I want, I know why I want it. I know what I want to do.
Death tis not time for you yet, it is not right, and never is right.
Time is on my side, and I will keep it that way.
I do not like waiting, if I have to I will.
I will do anything, it's how my heart feels!
Together, we were, just...just us. It was wonderful!
I know I've not felt anything like it before! I Loved that feeling more then any other!
It wouldn't matter if i won the lottery, $1000, a trip to Hawaii. No...
I had you, I had everything, but what I truly wanted....
Don't get me wrong no, I did want you, I loved you....
I just know why I wanted other things, and more importantly more reasons why I wanted you. Why I liked you, loved you, want to be with you.
I"ve changed, and made it so I know, why I feel the way I do.
My heart tells me, and I listen, we work together, having fun, feeling emotion.
We know what we must do, we are one, and two. We both love you.
We would go on forever with you, always talking, laughing, with you.
As long as it's with you, it doesn't matter, it shouldn't matter if anything else.
If we're poor, in the middle, rich...it doens't matter where we live.
WE are together, we can survive, I just want you. I don't care how others feel about this.
I know if they listened to their hearts they would know too, what they want and how they could try to get it for themselves, I want to get you.
As long as we're together, nothing We cannot Do!
Discuss Please :D