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Cashew
03-01-2009, 05:28 AM
A month later and here we are again. Me still not contest admin and still doing this. You know what I don't care this month. Do whatever you want, people complained about too many restrictions. Too many rules.

I'll keep it simple. If you think it could see print in the current era of Magic (not Un-Magic) you can make it happen. Try to really wow us this time, but keep that design tight.

Rules:
1) Don't suck.
2) Comply to the current era of Magic's designscape.

The following is the scoring rubric:
Wording:
5 - No wording mistakes
4 - Minor spelling and syntax errors.
3 - Major spelling and syntax errors.
2 - Errors that change the meaning of the card.
1 - Errors that cause the card to not work.
0 - Card is flawed beyond all recognition.

Balance:
5 - No Balance Issues
4 - Slightly unbalanced
3 - Fairly unbalanced
2 - Moderately unbalanced
1 - Heavily unbalanced
0 - No attention paid to the balance scale

Casting Cost:
5 - Perfect casting cost
4 - Slightly over or undercosted
3 - Fairly over or undercosted and/or questionable color issues.
2 - Moderately over or undercosted and/or apparent color issues.
1 - Heavily over or undercosted and/or major color issues.
0 - No regard to color scheme and/or no regard to casting cost and/or incorrect usage of hybrid/multicolor symbols.

Text Aesthetics:
5 - Text has no negative impact on the card.
4 - Card is too cramped due to bad spacing
3 - Card is too cramped due to excessive text.
2 - Card is too cramped with text due to unnecessary wording or abilities.
1 - Card is massively over cramped.
0 - No attention paid to text aesthetics.

Image Aesthetics:
5 - Image has a positive effect on the card as a whole.
4 - Image is appropriate and pleasant to the eye.
3 - Image is questionable to the card as a whole.
2 - Image is low quality or doesn't make sense to the card.
1 - Image detracts from the card as a whole.
0 - Image is entirely negative to the card aspect.
DQ - Image is copyrighted.

Technical Aesthetics:
5 - Card's technical aesthetics are appeasing.
4 - One of the following: Poor Set Symbol, Bad Artist Name, Poor Render, Other
3 - Two of the following: Poor Set Symbol, Bad Artist Name, Poor Render, Other
2 - Three of the following: Poor Set Symbol, Bad Artist Name, Poor Render, Other
1 - Four of the following: Poor Set Symbol, Bad Artist Name, Poor Render, Other
0 - Massive Technical Flaws.
DQ - Own name in artist without creating image

Innovation:
5 - Card attempts something new in the current design scape of Magic
4 - Card attempts something new that works outside the current design scape.
3 - Card has a discernible lack of creativity.
2 - Card attempts something new that doesn't work outside the current design scape.
1 - Card is wholly inventive rather than innovative.
0 - No attempt at innovation or creativity.
DQ - Creation of new keywords or undefined concepts such as triple hybrids.

Flavor:
5 - Card has an overall appeasing flavor.
4 - One aspect of the card distracts from overall flavor.
3 - Card lacks any overall flavor.
2 - Card has a disjointed flavor.
1 - Card has a negative flavor impact.
0 - Any portion of the card is out of the flavor of Magic or specified Magic era.

Overall Design
5 - Card could see print.
4 - Card has very few minor mistakes.
3 - Card has several minor mistakes.
2 - Card has moderate mistakes that need fixing.
1 - Card has heavy mistakes that need fixing.
0 - Card needs an entire re-design.

The following is how these scores are then combined -
Overall Aesthetics (0/5)
Overall Artistry (Flavor & Innovation): (0/5)
Overall Balance: (0/10)
Overall Design and Wording: (0/10)
Total Score: (0/30)

Now on to the standard rules.

1) Your card must be in card form.
This means you'll have to do extra work beyond simply designing the card. First, you'll need a way to render the card. I highly recommend the Magic Set Editor (http://magicseteditor.sourceforge.net) as it's still highly updated, and is very simple to use. The best looking renders are done by hand in a Photoshop program, but this is not necessary.

You will also need to find a website to host the image for it to be submitted. There are numerous free ones out there if you don't have access to a web host already. One I know to work personally that just requires registration and is very easy to use is Photobucket (http://photobucket.com/). Or you can simply just attach it to your thread.

Which leads to one last thing you have to find for your card - art.

2) All artwork should be credited and non-copyrighted.
While it may be very hard to find out who made a random image you rip straight off an image search. I highly recommend you locate galleries that will let you know who drew it while drawing it. Two massive galleries that you should know are Elfwood (http://www.elfwood.com) and deviantART (http://www.deviantart.com/).

Make sure you check the artist's profile page throughly to see if they are copyrighted are not. You can even go the extra step and ask for permission, which I highly encourage. It is essential that you credit them on the card as well.

3) Your entry must submitted by March 12th (last date for entries and edits is the 11th) Simple enough? Submit, edit, change as many times as you want until that date, then there will be no more.

4) Submit your entry in this thread.
This thread is for submission only, there will be a discussion thread created for comments on others cards or talking about the contest itself.

5) Your card must be balanced.
Do not expect to win if you create some off the wall insane creature that has every ability for 10 mana and is a 9/5. The goal is to create a card that could seemingly be printed. From the flavor to the mana cost to the power level of the card - all parts are considered.

6) Do not create a new keyword.
Use existing keywords, be careful when using block based ones such as Affinity, Splice, and Radiance. In the past, we've allowed some leinency with things such as Protection from X or Xcycling. Don't stretch it too far though.

kingez36@hotmail.co.uk
03-01-2009, 11:19 AM
wooo first dibs, go me for being organised... well here he is untill i think of something better...
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u156/kingez36/JimmytheBold-2.jpg

p-chan
03-02-2009, 02:59 PM
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/4915/matocmasterlavamancer.png (http://img13.imageshack.us/my.php?image=matocmasterlavamancer.png)

Artifactor
03-03-2009, 12:46 AM
here we go again

http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u168/Artifacter/GuardianDragons-1.jpg

Android Squirrel
03-03-2009, 10:51 PM
Too late to qualify....?

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/3117/stormspecter.jpg

Kamahl's Disciple
03-04-2009, 11:53 AM
Here's my submission to the contest: -

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b394/Ducktitan/Cards/Created%20Cards/World-VoyagerAsh.jpg

Coldstone
03-04-2009, 11:58 AM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y65/Futurama/FesteringShaman2.jpg

final_press
03-04-2009, 05:10 PM
http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii191/final_press/ThicketHound.png

Here's a less silly card... although the art and flavour text are still rather silly!

Punkrockanarchymagic
03-04-2009, 06:19 PM
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd232/Drizzlepunx/DivineAttrition.jpg

evol_intentions
03-05-2009, 06:12 AM
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/1268/firebraider.jpg

flounce
03-05-2009, 10:15 AM
heres mine

http://i402.photobucket.com/albums/pp109/flounce/GariiusVoulge3.jpg

KlassyReborn
03-05-2009, 10:45 AM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f208/KlassyReborn/CharlieFoxtrot.jpg

ps: Cash, i think you meant that submissions must be in by MARCH 12th, not Feburary. That's last month

Tekkactus
03-05-2009, 10:06 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/2m7i0y9.jpg

Art Forthcoming

EDIT: Should be rare. That'll be fixed in upcoming versions.

Cashew
03-06-2009, 01:00 PM
http://magicdeckvortex.com/vbforums/attachment.php?attachmentid=1960&stc=1&d=1236406157

My simple entry.

Monkey461
03-06-2009, 06:39 PM
PWNAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! here is my card... ho hum...

akashmar
03-07-2009, 01:02 AM
here's mine ... waiting for feedback

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y125/akashmar/CravenMarauder.jpg

SKEITH
03-07-2009, 05:43 AM
Well its my first time linking images hope this works

http://i111.photobucket.com/albums/n143/AcidBurn_07/Lifeless.jpg

Azrael Subucni
03-07-2009, 11:19 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v485/Zaborg/Lusca-1.jpg

NeoMagicwarrior
03-07-2009, 12:01 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w162/KAMagicwarrior/GorsGoblinChampion-1.jpg

George G
03-08-2009, 09:26 PM
http://i443.photobucket.com/albums/qq160/Ggarnermtg/PeaceTreaty.jpg

aglamm
03-09-2009, 05:46 PM
There is a Jester's cap, a Jester's mask, a Jester's sombrero, a Jester's scepter, but... Where is The Jester?!!

...HERE IT IS...

The Jester

http://i730.photobucket.com/albums/ww302/aglamm/TheJester.jpg

and its extended art version

http://i730.photobucket.com/albums/ww302/aglamm/TheJesterPromo.jpg

silverwolf
03-11-2009, 11:33 PM
Not to late yet?
Here is mine
http://i453.photobucket.com/albums/qq257/silverwolf72034/TeachingoftheForest.jpg

ThunderHog
03-15-2009, 07:28 PM
So I'm a day late I know. My internet was down all day yesterday - I couldn't get on. But, I'm good now!
kingez36@hotmail.co.uk - Jimmy the Bold
Aesthetics: 5/5
Artistry: 5/5
Balance: 9/10
Design: 10/10
TOTAL: 29/30

TH’s thoughts: Wow. Never thought I would start my role as contest mod with a near-perfect card. I see no problems with this card, and I could actually see something like it printed. The -1 point in balance comes from the fact that I think his P/T is just a smidgen too high.


P-chan - Matoc, Master Lavamancer
Aesthetics: 4/5 (no card number)
Artistry: 2/5 (Lavamancer??? Couldn’t find art with fire in it?)
Balance: 10/10
Design: 8/10 (Ramped up Grim Lavamancer, -2 pts. In creativity)
TOTAL: 25/30

TH’s thoughts: Just when you thought you could throw something by me, I busted you! Your character comes from the flavor texts of a couple different cards from the OD block, namely Flaring Pain. There are others, but I can’t think of them at the moment.


Artifactor - Guardian Dragons
Aesthetics: 5/5
Artistry: 5/5
Balance: 7/10 (Little too powerful. I do like that it taps though, however I would’ve liked to see the ability only playable at sorcery speed.)
Design: 8/10 (Dragon Roost wasn’t enough for ya?)
TOTAL: 25/30

TH’s thoughts: Not many thoughts really. My little notes pretty much sum it up.


johnming - Glass Passageway
Aesthetics: 5/5
Artistry: 5/5
Balance: 10/10
Design: 9/10
TOTAL: 29/30

TH’s thoughts: I didn’t dock points for this, but why is the border very straight and not rounded like the others? Anyway, the ONLY point I took a point off for was the ‘This mana doesn’t cause mana burn’ clause as I find it pointless and rather unappealing, especially to newer players.


Andriod Squirrel - Storm Specter

DQ’d. Getting art from DeviantArt.com is not a bad thing, it’s actually encouraged. However, not crediting the specific artist IS a bad thing. I’d be pretty pissed myself if I was the person that drew / created that (besides, the amount of verbal bashing your card was going to get very well may have taken away my new mod status).


Kamahl’s Disciple - World-Voyager Ash
Aesthetics: 4/5
Artistry: 4/5
Balance: 7/10
Design: 7/10
TOTAL: 22/30

TH’s thoughts - Voice of All is weeping in a dark corner somewhere. Gaining ALL of those abilities AND a decent body for such a cheap price is where the balance points came off. That creature, if left as-is, should cost no less than 6-7 CMC.


Coldstone - Festering Shaman
Aesthetics: 5/5
Artistry: 5/5
Balance: 9/10
Design: 8/10
TOTAL: 27/30

]TH’s thoughts - Personally, I have NEVER seen a ‘target opponent loses that much life’ clause in a mono-black card by itself. Every time I’ve ever seen it, it always has ‘and you gain that much life’ right behind it.


final_press - Thicket Hound
Aesthetics: 3/5
Artistry: 5/5
Balance: 10/10
Design: 10/10
TOTAL: 28/30

TH’s thoughts - I really like the fact that you made the art yourself by editing the picture of a dog (is it your dog?). Your -2 points came from the fact that you didn’t even take the time to give yourself a nice customized set symbol. That basic square is a huge eye-sore on such a nice card.


punkrockanarchymagic - Divine Attrition
Aesthetics: 4/5
Artistry: 5/5
Balance: 7/10
Design: 8/10
TOTAL: 24/30

TH’s thoughts - Both WoG AND Armageddon on a single card?! That’s way too much. If this card was released into standard, I think it likely that this card itself would introduce a whole new deck archetype into competitive play. It would probably do the same thing in Extended. Legacy, not so much... Anyway, I digress. Bottom line, the card’s just a bit too strong - should’ve upped the cost by 1 or 2.


evol_intentions - Fire-Braider
Aesthetics: 4/5
Artistry: 5/5
Balance: 9/10
Design: 5/10
TOTAL: 23/30

TH’s thoughts - I feel so bad taking so many points away from such a nice creation but it is necessary. Aesthetics: The words ‘Instant’ and ‘Sorcery’ should not be capitalized. Balance: I like the trade-off idea you have going, but I think it’s a bit TOO much. An additional :2mana: would have been acceptable. Design: This is where I had to trash you the most. This creature is, by definition, NOT a Spellshaper. Look up ‘Spellshaper’ in Gatherer - ALL Spellshapers have one thing in common and this creature does not have it. Wizard would have fit so much better.


flounce - Gariius Voulge
Aesthetics: 5/5
Artistry: 3/5 (Not digging the back shot)
Balance: 6/10
Design: 6/10
TOTAL: 20/30

TH’s thoughts - A prime example of a ‘fake hybrid’. Under NO circumstances is Lifelink a red ability. A mono-red creature will NEVER have Lifelink on it’s own. If this card were made gold instead of hybrid, it would’ve scored MUCH higher.


KlassyReborn - Charlie Foxtrot
Aesthetics: 0/5
Artistry: 0/5
Balance: 0/10
Design: 0/10
TOTAL: 0/30

TH’s thoughts - If you’re not gonna take the time to even finish your card, why should I take the time to grade it?


Tekkactus - Immolator’s Anthem
Aesthetics: 0/5
Artistry: 0/5
Balance: 8/10
Design: 5/10
TOTAL: 13/30

TH’s thoughts - Yup, fail is right...


Cashew - Memory Bauble
Aesthetics: 5/5
Artistry: 5/5
Balance: 6/10
Design: 8/10
TOTAL: 24/30

TH’s thoughts - Good news: I like the idea. Bad news: You broke it. Adding 4 of these to any given deck is an instant way to effectively reduce it’s maximum deck size to 56 instead of 60. Now, I’m expecting to hear the “But Urza’s Bauble and Mishra’s Bauble do the same exact thing!” and that is where you’d be very wrong. The bros Bauble’s make you wait to draw the card - which means you have to end your current turn before you can get the extra card. Yours however, grants you that card instantly.


Monkey461 - Malphrage, Archdemon of Netherrea
Aesthetics: 3/5
Artistry: 2/5
Balance: 8/10
Design: 7/10
TOTAL: 20/30

TH’s thoughts - Whenever you type a card’s name into its rules text, you need to type out the whole name. Other than that, I find the card very clunky and otherwise ugly. It’s no better than Vampiric Dragon thus it being Legendary only makes it worse.


akashmar - Craven Marauder
Aesthetics: 5/5
Artistry: 5/5
Balance: 10/10
Design: 10/10
TOTAL: 30/30

TH’s thoughts - Nice card. Got nothing to bash it with...


SKEITH - Lifeless Landscapes
Aesthetics: 3/5
Artistry: 5/5
Balance: 7/10
Design: 7/10
TOTAL: 22/30

TH’s thoughts - The idea itself has potential, but this isn’t a good way to go about it. I’m really not making the flavor connection between a barren wasteland and a flourishing mana base - which is what this card insinuates.


Azrael Subucni - Lusca
Aesthetics: 5/5
Artistry: 5/5
Balance: 8/10
Design: 8/10
TOTAL: 26/30

TH’s thoughts - Personally, I see this as another ‘fake hybrid’ however it’s not as bad as the previous one. Also, this card is FAR from being a Mythic Rare. I have no idea why you chose to make it one. On the plus side, I love the art! :D


NeoMagicWarrior - Gors, Goblin Champion
Aesthetics: 5/5
Artistry: 5/5
Balance: 8/10
Design: 5/10
TOTAL: 23/30

TH’s thoughts - Woohoo!!! Another awesomely fake hyrbid. I don’t see mono-black pumping up a creature and giving it First Strike and I don’t see mono-red straight up destroying a creature. On top of that, I find it highly unlikely that a Goblin of that particular caste to be awakened with a spark. Honestly, most of the points that you actually did get came from the fact that the card looks cool.


George G - Peace Treaty
Aesthetics: 3/5
Artistry: 5/5
Balance: 8/10
Design: 4/10
TOTAL: 20/30

TH’s thoughts - This is a prime example of a card that everybody hates. Nobody, and I mean ‘nobody’ likes a card that forces the game to end in a draw. I can see it being Mythic, but only due to it’s nature - not its power. I like the flavor text, but not the rules text. XD I also noticed a few minor typoes and general mistakes, but in the end if you really want the game to end in a draw, just force an infinite loop - it’s easier that way.


aglamm - The Jester
Aesthetics: 2/5
Artistry: 5/5
Balance: 8/10
Design: 0/10
TOTAL: 15/30

TH’s thoughts - 1) Why is it an artifact? 2) Why does it cost zero to play? 3) ‘Buffoon’ is not a creature type. Tekk’s card wasn’t even near-completion and it nearly scored as high as this one. Try putting a little more thought into your work.


silverwolf - Teaching of the Forest
Aesthetics: 3/5
Artistry: 5/5
Balance: 10/10
Design: 10/10
TOTAL: 28/30

TH’s thoughts - I admire your MS paint skills. Your sheer effort in trying (emphasis: ‘trying’) to make a decent art for your own card is what got you the 5 in Artistry. The points off came from the punctuation and minor typing errors in the rules text. Other than that, nice work.


***Current Standings***
akashmar - 30
kingez36@hotmail.co.uk - 29
johnming - 29
silverwolf - 28
final_press - 28
Coldstone - 27
Azrael Subucni - 26
P-chan - 25
Artifactor - 25
punkrockanarchymagic - 24
Cashew - 24
evol_intentions - 23
NeoMagicWarrior - 23
Kamahl’s Disciple - 22
SKIETH - 22
flounce - 20
Monkey461 - 20
George G - 20
aglamm - 15
Tekkactus - 13
KlassyReborn - 0
Android Squirrel - DQ
Congratulations to everyone who scored 22 or higher. You are the ones who have permission to enter the next round.

The good news for everyone else! This will probably be the last round that has a qualifier round.

akashmar
03-15-2009, 07:41 PM
perfect score ... i like

ThunderHog
03-15-2009, 07:44 PM
You earned it. Good luck on doing it again though. Mwhahaha!